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First revision: Making the reviews easier to read
Before
Long paragraphs lower readers' concentration.
After
With the index next to the paragraph,
readers can have ease in concentrating on the content of the writing.
Revision video
Second revision: Review a website/app used for study skills
Jacey's feedback
- any motivation (ex. financial reward) for mentors?
- would be better to add some detailed information about this app
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After
I added detailed information on this app such as a reward for the teacher, how to sign up, the difference between free/ premium version, and so on. Now readers can have more information about this app and choose whether they will use it or not.
Third revision: creating my own comic for my class
Jacey's feedback
- The level of activities might be challenging for the students (debating, filling the blanks in the sentences...)
- recommendation
: change to the easier task for elementary first-grade students
: change the target students' age
Before
After
I made the blanks with basic words and phrases for elementary first-grade students such as "Long time no see" or "holiday/Sunday". Students can easily guess the words by reading the comic strip.
Also, I reduced the number of themes that students should debate.
As the students are young their concentration is weaker than elder kids.
Fourth revision
: Introducing a website for assessment(+hurbard's criteria)
Jacey's feedback
- add some detailed images to explain the diversity of questions
- change the category of question to make it more relevant
- match the level of the quiz to the Intermeditate (B1) proficiency students
(The original quiz is too difficult)
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After
Biology→Languages
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Adding examples for the diverse form of questions
After
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After
I lowered the level of the quiz for the B1 proficiency students. However, I added more questions to make them experience diverse forms and get used to it.
Fifth revision: visual aspects of my website
(put your mouse pointer on the image to see the after version)
Title of website
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Menu bar
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Content introduction
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I thought my website lacks some images and diverse visual factors.
To solve that problem, I added some puzzle block images on the title to visualize the word "piece" Also, I put the rate of the number of visitors. Finally, I changed the content introduction part in slide show image to make it more clear and stylish.
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